is my feeling that your models do not do you images justice (in this series anyway-)
not to say that they are not lovely images themselves- just is that they try to hard for the
camera- there is no natural essence. i may be a poor judge of this though-
I agree with elevens comments on the models, two very dodgy facial expressions which spoils a supposedly close physical moment, technically fine apart from the top right corner, just draws the eye away.
But hey thats just my opinion, lots more won't agree lol